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IELTS WRITING Sample Answer ( IELTS 9 TEST 4 )

IELTS 9 Test 4 Task 1

 

The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.

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《Sample Answer》

The line graph compares the percentage of primary school students in New Zealand who learned a second language between 2006 and 2014.

 

It can be clearly seen that the most common second language had been French which remained at the same level at around 30% over the whole period. In 2006, the second most common second language was Japanese at about 28%, however, the percentage slightly decreased by 10% from 2006 to 2014. Spanish became the second common in 2014, at 23%.

 

Chinese and German were the two least common languages. The percentage of primary students who learned Chinese started lowest at 4% in 2006, but slightly increased to 13% in 2014. German, which was more popular than Chinese in 2006, had gradually declined to 7% in 2014. The proportion of other languages that primary students learned had an upward trend and peaked at 15% in 2013, but plummeted at 8% in 2014.

 

 

Estimated Band Score

 7.5 or 8.0 

 

私は、5年前O.A. 7.5を達成しました。このサンプルエッセイが皆さんの役に立てれば嬉しいです。アイエルツのライティングはまず書くことが重要です。がんばって書き続けてくださいね。

I got O.A 7.5 in the IELTS Academic Test five years ago. 

My advice to the next IELTS takers is prepare yourself and practice, practice and practice! When we are prepared it helps us gain our confidence as well.

 

 

 

Cambridge Ielts 9 Student's Book with Answers (IELTS Practice Tests)

Cambridge Ielts 9 Student's Book with Answers (IELTS Practice Tests)

 

 

おすすめの本は、これです!!

 

Target Band 7: IELTS Academic Module - How to Maximize Your Score (Third Edition)

Target Band 7: IELTS Academic Module - How to Maximize Your Score (Third Edition)