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IELTS WRITING Sample Answer ( IELTS 12 TEST 5 )

IELTS 12 Test 5 Writing Task 1

 

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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《Sample Answer》

The bar chart compares the proportions of Australian males and females in various age groups who participated in regular physical activity in 2010.

 

It can be clearly seen that the percentages of females who did physical activity regularly were higher than that of males in almost all age groups except for the age group 15 - 24. The percentage of women aged 45 to 54 was the highest, at 53.3%. On the contrary, the highest proportion of males who exercised daily were aged 15-24, at 52.8%.

 

When men became older, the percentage of males aged 35-44 who take part in regular physical activity slightly decreased to 39.5%, but recovered for those aged 65 and over, at 46.7%. On the contrary, the proportions of women who did regular physical activity rose gradually between the 15 to 24 and the 45 to 54 age group, 53.3%, but dropped at the same level for the 65 and over age group. Both males and females aged 65 and over accounted for  roughly 47% each.

 

Estimated Band Score

 7.0

 

私は、5年前O.A. 7.5を達成しました。このエッセイが皆さんの役に立てれば嬉しいです。

I got O.A 7.5 in the IELTS Academic Test five years ago. 

My advice to the next IELTS takers is prepare yourself and practice, practice and practice! When we are prepared it helps us gain our confidence as well.

 

 

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